You hear the one about the caned wife?

“Go on! Count them! See what the brute did to me. Twenty-one times!”

She’d burst into my office like a fuzzy gin; all rounded and bristling like a hedgehog, throwing her elbows on my desk; her puppies gamboling out of cornflower silk lace brassiere begging for a lick and a promise. I leaned back: she climbed on top. Not that I mind a good cowgirl ride, but usually there are adult beverages involved before a broad holds her nose long enough to forget my mug.

She crouched like a cougar, reaching back to ruck up her miniskirt; all the while wailing her distress. ‘Look, look,’ she said, pointing over her shoulder in the direction of her ass. I, being the consummate gentlemen — even when consummating a transaction consummated in a dark and smoky dive — heaved my walrus-like bulk out of my recliner and waddled around to peek at her goodies.


I saw. I saw a dame who did Pilates; probably a spinner too and hot yoga. I saw matching panties, the lace snugged up tight over her mons and biting deep into her tangy valley. What I didn’t see was the alleged brutality to her posterior. I said as much, and added, “If this is a case of abuse, call the fuzz.”

The look she gave me would have lowered my I.Q. into the negative realm had she not rolled her eyes and her knickers down her thighs. My eyes rolled too. Luckily I’m a jaded hard-ass who’s seen it all. That didn’t mean my one-eyed salami wasn’t salivating for a side of sauerkraut and white cream dressing. “Now… I see.”

There were multiple lines tracing—

“Count them!”

There were at least—

“I thought you were a dick? Use your fingers, moron!”

I used my thumb. Starting at the crests of her pillowy hillocks, I firmly pressed each welt from end-to-end. As I got lower, she got higher: her plump buttocks reaching for the sky, the tight fabric stretched taut between her tense thighs threatening to tear in twain. Her musk filled my blood, my cock screamed for air. By the time both thumbs were prying her crease open like a can of mustard sardines, my tongue was only inches away from s—

“Aren’t you going to take pictures?”

Mesmerized by her pink lips, I mewled like a brokenhearted calf when she slid off my desk, her rump scent marking my groin as she wiggled her cornflower blue panties up and her red miniskirt down.

“I guess not. So, will you take the case?”

Too stiff to sit just yet, I suavely perched on the corner and offered her a menthol. I flicked my Bic, she blew smoke rings around my libido. “What case?”

“My husband is—”

“I don’t do divorce, sweet cheeks.”

“Listen you imbecile, I don’t want a divorce, I don’t want the flatfeet involved, all I want is you to find out where his chippy lives.”

“Okay.” I must have redeemed myself, because she started spewing like Niagara Falls right before they turn it off at night. It seems they were in a D/s relationship and things were peachy right up until he started a new job with long hours and overnight trips. The spankings were coming less and less frequent, like the number 24 bus on a Friday night when the college kids were on break. The final straw was the twenty-one stroke caning. Which is when she stormed out of their house like a banshee looking for an agave grove to quench her fire and fury.

“So you see, I have a contract! I demand he lives up to his responsibilities!”

“So… it was too much?”

“Are you a fucking idiot? NO! It was supposed to be fifty with the cane and an ass reaming!”

I waited until Vesuvius stopped erupting. “Well… I can give you the rest, if you want.”

The setting sun was obscured by the cloud of tire smoke like from an all-you-can-eat barbecue when she peeled her Ferrari out of the parking lot. I rubbed the mark on my face. For a sweet piece of tail, she sure could swing a racket. I leaned back in my chair, took a swig of Jack and a couple of Tums. It’s tough being a P.I.

I guess dinner wouldn’t be forthcoming tonight. I dialed for takeout and waited for her return.

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19 thoughts on “You hear the one about the caned wife?

  1. lurvspanking January 17, 2018 / 11:19 am

    Note from myself: This is a piece of flash fiction, written in twenty minutes. It’s not edited other than for grammar and is a meant to be entertaining rather than making a point. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • lurvspanking January 17, 2018 / 2:38 pm

      Thank you. Flash fiction is fun to write when the scene “flashes” in front of eyes while at work. Makes the day more fun. 🙂


      • Sweetgirl January 17, 2018 / 2:40 pm

        Lol definitely


    • lurvspanking January 17, 2018 / 3:14 pm

      Hi Fondles. A nice quickie for a Wednesday. 😉


  2. Mrs Fever January 17, 2018 / 6:39 pm

    Oh my gosh, I *LOVE* this! You’ve got the irony factor down pat (or down Mike, if you’re a Hammer fan), and the humorous take on Chandler-esque allegory is brilliant! 😀


    • lurvspanking January 18, 2018 / 12:20 pm

      I do love irony and writing about serious topics with humor. 🙂


  3. Marie Rebelle January 17, 2018 / 7:26 pm

    Absolutely brilliant story! It had me smiling, it had me anticipating some sexy times between them and smiling some more when it didn’t happen! Love it!

    Rebel xox


    • lurvspanking January 18, 2018 / 12:22 pm

      Sexy times are often thwarted in real life — unlike in fiction. Smile away Rebel. 🙂


  4. missy January 17, 2018 / 10:04 pm

    This brightened up my day 😊


  5. Rudi January 17, 2018 / 10:14 pm

    Love the style – so trashy PI novel! Excellent.


  6. MPB January 18, 2018 / 8:03 pm

    I loved this. Great story!


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