It’s time for your birthday spanking!

For Bonnie’s MBS Spanko Brunch #192 a gender-neutral story.

An adult ‘vanilla’ story about spanking and sex and very bad words, read with caution

‘I never really agreed to a birthday spanking.’
‘You said for your 30th I could do what I wanted.’
‘Yes, but that wasn’t a spanking!’
‘Too late, I can’t return the gift.’
‘What gift?’
‘This nice shiny paddle!’
‘No fucking way are you hitting me with… ouch!’
‘I’m putting over my lap for your spanking and you’ll stay there until I’m done.’
‘This is so wrong.’
‘Of course the spanking has to be on the bare to count.’
‘That is even wronger… more wrong… no way!’
‘Yes way dear. You promised!!!!!’
‘That’s two extra paddles for bad language already. You sure you don’t want to submit?’
‘Damn it.’
‘That’s three! This is so much fun!’
‘For you!’
‘If you don’t want me to spank you honey bear, I’ll let you up. I promise.’
‘Aw, hell sweetie, go ahead and spank me 30 times for my birthday. A promise is a promise.’
‘Actually it’s 35 now.’

After thirty-five fairly hard smacks and thirty-five progressively louder yelps, there was one very red bottom with two very aroused people frantically flinging various articles of clothing and the loud juicy sloshing of a good old-fashioned balls-deep birthday fucking.

In the afterglow, honey bear said to sweetie: it’s your birthday next month. I think a cane is on my wish list.

3 thoughts on “It’s time for your birthday spanking!

  1. KayLynn September 20, 2009 / 2:08 pm


    Great banter & I absolutely love the unexpected swat! The escalation is priceless on the part of the spanker. And I’m so loving the Dom mentality that comes rushing forward submission directives… ooooooh There is a playground full of tension in this work – very very fun to read!! KayLynn


    • lurvspanking September 20, 2009 / 2:20 pm

      Thanks Kay Lynn. It’s *funny* how having someone over your knee is so intimate and yet so powerfully emotional.



  2. lurvspanking September 20, 2009 / 7:42 pm

    I have written five chapters so far in my novel up to a total of 8,400 words. Wrote almost 2,000 words just today.

    Any authors or agents out there, let me know. This is going to be a bestseller.



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