Desires al fresco

clinging leaves stubborn
punished cheeks glowing crimson
falling sun parts crests

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  1. Oh, that’s VERY clever. Imaginative imagery, as always. Technically wonderful. If I write that out and stick it on my laptop, it should keep me motivated all day. 😉

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    • This is about the sixth iteration of the haiku. Still doesn’t completely capture the moment, but then again, no form of media can express an actual event. 🙂

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  2. I love it.

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  3. Fantastic

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