Comment in response to a poem

licking sweet cream
tongues swapping sticky sweetness
shadows move slowly

Click here to read ‘I know, I’m Bad’ at Southside of Heaven. I wrote this haiku as a response in the comments.

8 thoughts on “Comment in response to a poem

  1. Ina Morata's avatar Ina Morata July 26, 2016 / 2:16 pm

    They complement one another very well! 🙂

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      • Ina Morata's avatar Ina Morata July 26, 2016 / 3:14 pm

        It’s a very intuitive way to respond. 🙂

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        • lurvspanking's avatar lurvspanking July 26, 2016 / 3:16 pm

          Well, I started years ago commenting on blogs with poetry because sometimes it represented my thoughts better. Soon, my friends were disappointed if I didn’t leave a poem. 🙂

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          • Ina Morata's avatar Ina Morata July 26, 2016 / 3:48 pm

            That’ll teach you! 😉 I think it’s great!

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            • lurvspanking's avatar lurvspanking July 26, 2016 / 3:49 pm

              You know, if you want me to leave you a poem on one of your posts, all you have to do is ask. 🙂

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            • Ina Morata's avatar Ina Morata July 26, 2016 / 3:50 pm

              You are very welcome to do so!

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            • lurvspanking's avatar lurvspanking July 26, 2016 / 4:24 pm

              Left you a poetry comment on ‘Mating of love birds’.

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